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    dots Submission Name: Starry Dream Filled Eyesdots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 847
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    dotsStarry Dream Filled Eyesdots
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    I'm here right now
    My beautiful my precious baby girl
    Staring into your starry dream filled eyes
    Seeking to protect
    Hindering from any form of harm
    Aid in fixing and facing your mistakes
    Pour water on all the dragon’s that breathe a fiery flame
    So you don’t have to continue on fighting your vivid nightmares
    I’ll keep your dreams lit
    Hold your head high
    When you’ve lost your mind
    Everything always has a way of turning out fine
    Don’t worry your mine
    Don’t worry I’m still here
    Forever staring into your starry dream filled eyes
    That happen to look exactly like mine




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