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    dots Submission Name: Starry Dream Filled Eyesdots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1335
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    dotsStarry Dream Filled Eyesdots
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    I'm here right now
    My beautiful my precious baby girl
    Staring into your starry dream filled eyes
    Seeking to protect
    Hindering from any form of harm
    Aid in fixing and facing your mistakes
    Pour water on all the dragonís that breathe a fiery flame
    So you donít have to continue on fighting your vivid nightmares
    Iíll keep your dreams lit
    Hold your head high
    When youíve lost your mind
    Everything always has a way of turning out fine
    Donít worry your mine
    Donít worry Iím still here
    Forever staring into your starry dream filled eyes
    That happen to look exactly like mine




    Submitted on 2012-04-28 12:44:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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