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Author: isis_lenore
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From the corner of my eye I peek
As you walk into the room and I
Hold my breath waiting, wanting you
To be able to come to my table
And embrace me like I desire.
But instead, as I exhale I watch
You walk on by.

You smile as you pass, as if we
Were old friends, from way back
But still you walk past me.
You don’t stop.

Perhaps, later I will see you
In passing some dark hall or
Side street and you will reach
Out for me, to stall me
Just for a moment
To smile, to explain, to exclaim…

But I will walk on by.

Submitted on 2012-04-28 20:26:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is an enjoyable and infinite muse...
life has many "passing bys" , leaving many "what ifs" and missed opportunities...

thanks for sharing!
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