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Submission Name: Forgive for Life dots

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Author:	Darkwarrior
ASL Info:	27
Elite Ratio:	3.51 - 60/63/33
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
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Forgive for Life dots

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I've fallen into depths we've yet forseen.
That altar you hold so high in the sky,
is a mere figment of fantasy.
And as I bellow in the shadows,
in search for that warming embraceful light.
I hold on to the hope that one day,
I may again, FLY.

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