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    dots Submission Name: Forgive for Lifedots
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    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 60/63/33
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsForgive for Lifedots
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    I've fallen into depths we've yet forseen.
    That altar you hold so high in the sky,
    is a mere figment of fantasy.
    And as I bellow in the shadows,
    in search for that warming embraceful light.
    I hold on to the hope that one day,
    I may again, FLY.




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