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    dots Submission Name: I Admitdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Admitdots
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    I admit.
    I want to circle
    My arms
    Around you. Snag you
    In my trap.
    I want to
    Grab handfuls of your
    Soft cotton shirt, and inhale
    You’re decadent scent that
    Swirls around us, enclosing us,
    Waltzing around my senses,
    Bringing me back to
    Woody, musky forest air and
    Happier times.
    I want to feel
    You against me. I want to
    Bury my face in
    Your shoulder and
    Forget the world.




    Submitted on 2012-05-07 22:11:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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