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    dots Submission Name: Unholy Dire ( For PoA )dots
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    Author: Rainmaker
    ASL Info:    23 / M / Finland
    Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 45/50/19
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 1013
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1780



    Description:
       This is the raw version of the lyrics for metal band Plain Of Agony ( where i play bass ) http://www.plainofagony.rocks.it This is the first song from PoA ever made totally. If you are wondering of the letters and numbers in ( ) -marks they are marking the part of the song.


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    dotsUnholy Dire ( For PoA )dots
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    a1)From the lines of bible i read it
    Our world is doomed, it is going to go astray
    I have preached of it,
    Apocalypse is on its bloody way

    (a1)Days have come to end
    But the clock ticks on
    My wounds wont mend
    Time to announce the Satan's son!

    It isn't about pride or glory
    Come and hear the gleeman's story

    (2x)Blood, smoke and fire
    i hail thee, my sire
    listen to me, you liar
    It's all about unholy dire!

    (a2saw)In silence they march
    Across the plains
    Their armors shine
    Their blood is mine!

    (a2saw)And they are coming,
    can you feel it?
    I have foreseen this
    we are not ready for the kiss of death

    It isn't about pride or glory
    Come and hear the gleeman's story

    listen to me, you liar
    It's all about unholy dire!

    (b)Apocalypse has come
    Raining down the bolts of fire
    We can do nothing for some
    Because we released the unholy dire!

    (a1)From the lines of bible i read it
    Our world is doomed, it is going to go astray
    I have preached of it,
    Apocalypse is on its bloody way

    (a1)Days have come to end
    But the clock ticks on
    My wounds wont mend
    Time to announce the Satan's son!

    It isn't about pride or glory
    Come and hear the gleeman's story

    listen to me, you liar
    It's all about unholy dire!

    (b)Apocalypse has come
    Raining down the bolts of fire
    We can do nothing for some
    Because we released the unholy dire!




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      This sounds like a really good song, I wouldn't mind hearing the music and all... I'm in to all sorts of music, except a lot of rap and most girl singers, but anyways... I don't see anything that needs to change, it's really good. Sorry i don't really have much to say here except thanks for sharing this.. Hope to hear more from you soon.
    Jessica
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by nameless child | [ Reply to This ]


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