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there are times to be critcal there are times to criticize there is a value for a good critique. but you can carry it to far you will crush my soul and make me cry. but i will carry on I have come to crystallization cruel words are cunnning and cutting. but i will carry on it takes a loving soul to say I forgive you for hurting me. though i don't think you know what you are saying stop your hurting me! I know I'm not an american master by far but I'm doing the best I can I may be absentminded but I'm absollutely strong, loving and caring I'm the the kind of person if you need a hand I will give the shirt off my back if you need food I will feed you if you need guidance I can and will guide you don't guilt me in to seeing it your way. |
This is a very great write! I enjoyed reading this poem and like it very much! Not alot of people are like that... | Posted on 2012-05-14 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ] | i like youre message, yes thinks people say will hurt you, but it takes a stronge person to not only forgive those, but also continue to hold some care for them | | Posted on 2012-05-12 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ] | I liked it! :) | I really enjoyed this last bit.... "if you need a hand I will give the shirt off my back if you need food I will feed you if you need guidance I can and will guide you don't guilt me in to seeing it your way." | Posted on 2012-05-11 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ] | |