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    dots Submission Name: critcal eyesdots
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    Author: littlepoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 737/570/274
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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    there are times to be critcal
    there are times to criticize
    there is a value for a good critique.

    but you can carry it to far
    you will crush my soul
    and make me cry.

    but i will carry on
    I have come to crystallization
    cruel words are cunnning and cutting.

    but i will carry on
    it takes a loving soul to say I forgive you
    for hurting me.

    though i don't think you
    know what you are saying
    stop your hurting me!

    I know I'm not an american master
    by far but I'm doing the best I can
    I may be absentminded

    but I'm absollutely
    strong, loving and caring
    I'm the the kind of person

    if you need a hand
    I will give the shirt off my back
    if you need food I will feed you

    if you need guidance
    I can and will guide you
    don't guilt me in to seeing it your way.




    Submitted on 2012-05-08 20:34:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very great write! I enjoyed reading this poem and like it very much!
    Not alot of people are like that...
    | Posted on 2012-05-14 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like youre message, yes thinks people say will hurt you, but it takes a stronge person to not only forgive those, but also continue to hold some care for them
    | Posted on 2012-05-12 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it! :)

    I really enjoyed this last bit....

    "if you need a hand
    I will give the shirt off my back
    if you need food I will feed you

    if you need guidance
    I can and will guide you
    don't guilt me in to seeing it your way."
    | Posted on 2012-05-11 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]


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