Fear the edge

Author: ChrystalR ASL Info:    23/Female/Norway Elite Ratio:    5.14 - 126 /121 /58 Words: 93

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Fear the edge

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*** Ice and flame will laugh out loud Earth and water in the dark Mountain bitter vain and proud Whispered pain still leaves a mark Angry hammer cracks the planks Hides the mirror that shows fear Sword points hold and steer the ranks From the edge where love is near ***

Submitted on 2012-05-09 16:36:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like the cadence and the warrior references For me I feel like there is a woman who's Spirit is being forged in life's harsher battles Of Love and dominance

| Posted on 2014-04-11 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

the edge of pain, the edge of darkness, the edge of life...sometimes we all seem to be right on it...we can sway one way or the other.. and sometimes we fear love so much we back away from it...as if it were a sword, or the edge of a plank or the edge of a cliff... jacob

| Posted on 2012-05-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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