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Fear the edge

Author: ChrystalR
ASL Info:    23/Female/Norway
Elite Ratio:    5.14 - 126 /121 /58
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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First poem written in quite a while, please be kind!

Fear the edge


Ice and flame will laugh out loud
Earth and water in the dark
Mountain bitter vain and proud
Whispered pain still leaves a mark

Angry hammer cracks the planks
Hides the mirror that shows fear
Sword points hold and steer the ranks
From the edge where love is near


Submitted on 2012-05-09 16:36:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the cadence and the warrior references
For me I feel like there is a woman who's
Spirit is being forged in life's harsher battles
Of Love and dominance
| Posted on 2014-04-11 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
  the edge of pain, the edge of darkness, the edge of life...sometimes we all seem to be right on it...we can sway one way or the other..

and sometimes we fear love so much we back away from if it were a sword, or the edge of a plank or the edge of a cliff...

| Posted on 2012-05-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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