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    dots Submission Name: sweet goodbyesdots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 366
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    Bytes: 536



    Description:
       To my beautiful darkness that has helped me so much in my love life I am really appreciative of all you have done and I will always be here for you like you were for me so don't be afraid to call at 3 in the morning just to talk cause I will answer


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    Its been awhile
    Since we shared
    A secret lovers kiss
    but I would like
    To believe
    We are still friends
    In the short time
    As lovers
    You showed me a lot
    And you were there for me
    How Will I
    Ever repay you?
    you helped me realize
    just what I needed and wated
    And helpes me see
    I had it all along
    Waiting as a friend
    so we say goodbye
    As secret lovers
    and hopefully open the door
    As really good friends




    Submitted on 2012-05-10 09:23:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this i think we have/will all have a person like this in our life.... time goes on things get better its harder to loose a friend thats a lover then a boyfriend girlfriend good luck doll
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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