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    dots Submission Name: seeing to your souldots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 331
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    Bytes: 594



    Description:
       To my wonderful boyfriend Dustin I love you angel


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    dotsseeing to your souldots
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    Laying here in our bed
    Thinking about the days
    That is to come
    can't wait to have
    Your arms around me
    That look of love
    So deeply in your eyes
    Gets my heart beating
    Faster every time
    To know I'm the one
    You long for
    Each and every night
    What we have now
    Is so fresh and new
    Will it be able to stand
    The test of time?
    I sure do hope so
    I want this love
    To grow stronger
    Threw every day and night
    I don't want this feeling
    To ever end




    Submitted on 2012-05-10 09:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A state of euphoria. I wish your love grows intense every day and you can enjoy your dream through out your life. Best wishes. May you enjoy your life with Dustin and have a wonderful and lovely life ahead.
    | Posted on 2012-05-13 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      (: Very good! It was very visual.
    | Posted on 2012-05-10 00:00:00 | by ShameirE | [ Reply to This ]


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