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    dots Submission Name: Now And Thendots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 428
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is the first piece of writing i have done in a very long time! maybe almost two years!
    So it's pretty much just a current frame of mind and this time and now nothing to fancy.
    Enjoy. :)


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    dotsNow And Thendots
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    The taste. That simple taste!
    Taste of being? of self being?
    That feeling one has known, has held. has tasted.
    A freedom to accept
    A prerogative to ignore
    Carelessness
    The world is here to take for granted
    Along with the people in it
    Give me what is mine
    I need what is yours
    I want what is yours!
    I hate what is mine

    Longer the days become
    So quick do these years end
    They grow stubborn as i do
    With strength i fight this day!
    Just for me to surrender the next
    This young mind still exists
    This old but young soul still resists

    Wake me when the time comes
    I care not for what is now
    Though now is all i have
    Now is in need of change
    Now moulds the future
    This day
    This night
    This present
    This life
    You and i must decide

    When the last moon rises
    When the final sun sets
    When birds no longer sing
    When rivers change there flow
    Will you stand with me ready at my aid
    To fight as one
    When we hear the trumpets fade.




    Submitted on 2012-05-11 07:06:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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