Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Now And Thendots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 409
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1188



    Description:
       This is the first piece of writing i have done in a very long time! maybe almost two years!
    So it's pretty much just a current frame of mind and this time and now nothing to fancy.
    Enjoy. :)


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNow And Thendots
    -------------------------------------------


    The taste. That simple taste!
    Taste of being? of self being?
    That feeling one has known, has held. has tasted.
    A freedom to accept
    A prerogative to ignore
    Carelessness
    The world is here to take for granted
    Along with the people in it
    Give me what is mine
    I need what is yours
    I want what is yours!
    I hate what is mine

    Longer the days become
    So quick do these years end
    They grow stubborn as i do
    With strength i fight this day!
    Just for me to surrender the next
    This young mind still exists
    This old but young soul still resists

    Wake me when the time comes
    I care not for what is now
    Though now is all i have
    Now is in need of change
    Now moulds the future
    This day
    This night
    This present
    This life
    You and i must decide

    When the last moon rises
    When the final sun sets
    When birds no longer sing
    When rivers change there flow
    Will you stand with me ready at my aid
    To fight as one
    When we hear the trumpets fade.




    Submitted on 2012-05-11 07:06:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    195095

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Linger written by saartha
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Bond written by saartha
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Push written by JanePlane
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry