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    dots Submission Name: Wake Updots
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    Author: AshleyDYoung
    ASL Info:    19/F/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 28/33/34
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsWake Updots
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    Wake up your dream is ending as reality kicks in
    the man who once shared your soul now he keeps pulling away.
    wake up your dream of a fairy tale is ending,
    there is no longer a pumpkin coach with white horses coming up to the door,
    there is no beautiful white gown, not anymore..
    wake up sleeping beauty the nurse says as she hands me my pills. "its time for your morning meds"




    Submitted on 2012-05-11 17:34:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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