That's the Truth (Part 1)

Author: Black Angel ASL Info:    22/F/Tx Elite Ratio:    2 - 16 /96 /96 Words: 84

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That's the Truth (Part 1)

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"I don't blame you" He wrote in his blood "It's not your fault" He said as the needle dragged across his skin "It's ok" He believed as the needle punctured his flesh "Don't worry" He thought as his high hit "I'll be alright" He wished as the venom took control "Please don't cry" He hoped as his eyes began to close "I love you!" He screamed as his mouth dried "And I regret nothing" He promised as cold fingers of death embraced him

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