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    dots Submission Name: That's the Truth (Part 2)dots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 16/96/96
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThat's the Truth (Part 2)dots
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    "I'm to blame"
    She screamed in her head
    "It's all my fault"
    She seethed, punching the wall
    "It will never be ok"
    She cried as the demons raged in her head
    "Worry grips me"
    She felt as pain tore her heart
    "It won't be the same"
    She pleaded as her blood boiled
    "I can't stop the tears"
    She sighed as the whiskey burned her throat
    "I hate you!"
    She swore as her sanity broke
    "I regret everything"
    She thought as her body crimpled to the ground




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