[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: In Times Like These!dots

    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 641
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 630

       Too many debates, just fed up!

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsIn Times Like These!dots

    The severity of political turmoil,
    Can cause the most ugly
    Confrontations on the same soil,
    In which empty shells recoil
    And all just for the price of oil.
    Is it simply dead
    Promises to all residents,
    Who soak up sarcasm
    In hopes of obtaining
    Printed faces of dead presidents.
    Is it just me?
    Wishing that in times like these
    There was more hope,
    In a far distant future
    Where grown people didn't
    Have to dirty up their names,
    Just to obtain a single vote.

    Submitted on 2012-05-13 12:49:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      i actually like this your opinion is out in full force like a tornado on a sunday of all days.... anyway keep it up k bye
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    AI written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Fasade written by jackz
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Push written by JanePlane
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    4th of July written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]