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    dots Submission Name: In Times Like These!dots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 655
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    Description:
       Too many debates, just fed up!


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    dotsIn Times Like These!dots
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    The severity of political turmoil,
    Can cause the most ugly
    Confrontations on the same soil,
    In which empty shells recoil
    And all just for the price of oil.
    or
    Is it simply dead
    Promises to all residents,
    Who soak up sarcasm
    In hopes of obtaining
    Printed faces of dead presidents.
    or
    Is it just me?
    Wishing that in times like these
    There was more hope,
    In a far distant future
    Where grown people didn't
    Have to dirty up their names,
    Just to obtain a single vote.




    Submitted on 2012-05-13 12:49:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i actually like this your opinion is out in full force like a tornado on a sunday of all days.... anyway keep it up k bye
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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