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    dots Submission Name: To Daredots

    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 211/290/189
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsTo Daredots

    Splayed in the dampening grass.
    Fireflies glittering the air.
    We dare;
    to find safety in one another's arms..
    Promises in our eyes,
    and sanity in each other's lips.

    Submitted on 2012-05-13 22:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      relying on another is a risk...

    i like those two lines...daring to find safety in another's arms...

    we would think that it would be playing it safe to do that...but these days relationships are so iffy...it is a risk...

    but i hope we never stop taking that risk...playing it safe is like being a firefly with no light.

    | Posted on 2012-05-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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