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    dots Submission Name: Slowdots
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    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSlowdots
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    Words are extremely slow in their usage, thrown back at me frequently by the abstractions. Important is the God Who doesn't speak but shows. And the luck that plays like a born child, born roped, born rebellious and limitlessly true. That stabs constantly in what I shout and descript about. That ignores apparently all what I say __ whatever I say. And keeps on listening and keeps on waiting for centuries, for ages, for the whole lives to reveal what I have changed __ I human.




    Submitted on 2012-05-14 13:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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