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Word Whore

Author: Magnolia Steele
ASL Info:    30/female/Northwest CA
Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 2492 /1825 /232
Words: 33
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Word Whore

...and more
She pleads
Devours the seeds
Of creation
Carries a promise
Of tomorrow-

Tomorrow comes and goes
exclamation marks
On the sheets
Time ages
Them both
Memories dry like ink

Submitted on 2012-05-14 23:57:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  nice analogy...she and the words both...devouring the seeds as time ages both...

memories dry...and she feels dried up...the words no longer come.

i like how this is trimmed to the bone...but carries strong weight to it.

| Posted on 2012-05-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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