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Lady lips lingered lies
Slipped through cracks
By and by
rush in currents of
Mother blood and Father Rye
Mark her cheeks
Fetch a pretty penny
For a lass that
The strings of nature
Carry the moon
Between her thighs
slip through the cracks
breathe in truth
| i see much double meaning through this...two uses of "lies" "slipping through the cracks"|
she lives a lie yet in reality her plight in life is truth...and she gives of herself without reserve...lying and lying...
carrying the moon between her thighs, that many a guy would like to lasso...
"Buffalo Gal can you come out tonight!"
i like the implications in your work...less is more...and you create so many possibilities of double meanings---
i like abstractness and suggestiveness...use it much myself.
look forward to reading more of your work.
|| Posted on 2012-05-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ] |