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    dots Submission Name: yearning obliviondots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       How to wish for the cold to pass and how to appreciate the warmth of the Sun. Until we really know the things that our human understanding cannot fathom be finally revealed on what it the meaning.


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    dotsyearning obliviondots
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    Slowly elevate myself below...
    There's peace with hiding
    As an astronaut has a slow-motion moment
    There are stars in the darkness.
    Yet, we cannot fathom, what darkness truly is
    It seduces many to feel despondent.
    Cut your losses.
    Here, evolve!
    Quite hated by lower animals,
    Descend and searchsings a s for the despondent, royal.
    She once sang with a voice that stopped the Heavens.
    And, illuminated the celebrated twilight
    With a cherub's brilliance, once belonging to a the chief of angels.
    Be it the truth.
    Most exalted only to be torn down by the passage of glory.
    Until the all that have and will be had, for all the eyes to marvel at the mysterious truth with the One that holds all of everything.





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