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Although you probably wont read this

Author: blankscreen
ASL Info:    22/f/NY
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Although you probably wont read this

I know you are trying to forget
And I deserve all I've gotten
I just wanted to let you know

That it hurts just to breath
When you are not here
Numbers and letters don't make sense
Shirts turn inside out and backwards
When I've put them on a million times before

I will always love you
And I know
It will never stop hurting
That you let me go

I've made mistakes
And been through so much
But this time hurts the worst
Because I tried so hard to make it work
And ended up making it

They all tell me it's ok
That everything will work out
And we will both have a better future
But I don't listen
Because all I want
is to hold your hand
and kiss your nose

I cant sleep without you near me
Or wake up without your face upon my chest
I can't breath without your love
Knowing I will always be second best
Because I will never match up to who you wanted me to become
And you were always too perfect
For less than that

Maybe you will move on
Maybe you'll forget me
And always remember how broken we were
But I'll remember hearing your keys jingle as you ran up the steps
How you were the only one who could make me
and breath.
But now I can't.
Overworked and overtired.
I would give it all up
for one more chance.

I miss you.

Submitted on 2012-05-16 10:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The nose again... real. There's something special about a nose kiss.
| Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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