Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The Promises of Goddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 543
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1840



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Promises of Goddots
    -------------------------------------------




    How many millions through the ages of religion
    Have been tortured in bloody suffering
    Scourged by the whipping promise of death
    To save their life
    Their very souls from torment

    As death and burning hell are the promises of God
    And every human is nailed to its cross
    Born into sin
    So the gift of life
    Has no meaning

    These fiends, these hellions of religion
    The twisted sickness of jewellery and gold’s encrustation
    Upon the idols faith
    These sanctimonious deniers of life
    Build their cathedrals and mosques to the worship of death

    These measly and inane institutions
    Whose figurehead by word bleat pompous
    In the blooded trails of subjugation
    Profess to know the shelter of truth
    In abject slavery to their lies

    Such is the vicious unrelenting pursuit of control
    Bent to money and luxury
    While poverty continues
    And supports the throne of Mecca and the Vatican
    By pious semblance of the demon

    Writ full upon their histories
    The slaughter and the pogrom of humanity
    These deceivers of life
    These proponents of death
    Of promises made in the darkest pits

    It is those scratching ignominious scavengers
    Those parasites of the holocaust
    Who upon their perfidious alters
    Sacrifice in perfume and psalm
    The creation and the word of God

    Deliver us all to death and hopelessness
    To a prayer for mercy and a better afterlife
    They who turn humanity into filth
    Scrabbling at the scraps tossed to them
    By an all knowing, beneficent, merciful, loving
    Compassionate and vengeful Lord





    Submitted on 2012-05-16 13:29:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    195143

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Bre-anna written by Daniel Barlow
    In God's Name written by poetotoe
    A Fire! A Knife! A Black Crow Calls! written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love and Solitaire written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Dirge of Nostalgia written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Instances written by hyproglo
    Everyone written by poetotoe
    an explanation of how i was not good written by Daniel Barlow
    Legends written by poetotoe
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Can't let my demons go written by faideddarkness
    I am a sorry son. written by MyPeriodical
    ... written by Daniel Barlow
    Benediction written by Daniel Barlow
    Where is My Ghost written by ForgottenGraves
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    The Last to Walk the Earth written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Watch them Die written by HisNameIsNoMore
    less is more written by Daniel Barlow
    One day older, One year wiser. written by Rhythmal
    Chasing The Lie written by jackz
    Stance written by Daniel Barlow
    not alone written by Daniel Barlow
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    On Top of a Water Wheel written by Wolfwatching
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The First Time written by Wolfwatching
    In the end written by Janesaddiction

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry