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    dots Submission Name: The Promises of Goddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Promises of Goddots
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    How many millions through the ages of religion
    Have been tortured in bloody suffering
    Scourged by the whipping promise of death
    To save their life
    Their very souls from torment

    As death and burning hell are the promises of God
    And every human is nailed to its cross
    Born into sin
    So the gift of life
    Has no meaning

    These fiends, these hellions of religion
    The twisted sickness of jewellery and gold’s encrustation
    Upon the idols faith
    These sanctimonious deniers of life
    Build their cathedrals and mosques to the worship of death

    These measly and inane institutions
    Whose figurehead by word bleat pompous
    In the blooded trails of subjugation
    Profess to know the shelter of truth
    In abject slavery to their lies

    Such is the vicious unrelenting pursuit of control
    Bent to money and luxury
    While poverty continues
    And supports the throne of Mecca and the Vatican
    By pious semblance of the demon

    Writ full upon their histories
    The slaughter and the pogrom of humanity
    These deceivers of life
    These proponents of death
    Of promises made in the darkest pits

    It is those scratching ignominious scavengers
    Those parasites of the holocaust
    Who upon their perfidious alters
    Sacrifice in perfume and psalm
    The creation and the word of God

    Deliver us all to death and hopelessness
    To a prayer for mercy and a better afterlife
    They who turn humanity into filth
    Scrabbling at the scraps tossed to them
    By an all knowing, beneficent, merciful, loving
    Compassionate and vengeful Lord





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