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    dots Submission Name: Just in Casedots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    22/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 222/196/163
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJust in Casedots
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    I wanted to let you know
    That I am waiting
    That I realize that no one will ever measure up
    to you
    And I am waiting
    for you

    I wanted to let you know
    That you're the only one
    I want to hold my hand
    To kiss my nose
    To wake up next to
    You're the only one
    I think about every night
    every morning
    and every second of every day

    I wanted to let you know
    you may never forgive me
    and I may never forgive myself
    But I will wait
    Until the day
    we can move on

    I love you.




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      Your two most recent writes remind me of Love Hurts by Nazareth. And if love really is just a lie like he sings, then I would much rather be a fool.
    But don't worry, because I've got your back.
    And every time you feel like crying, I'm gonna try to make you laugh.
    And if I can't, if it just hurts too bad
    Then we'll wait for it to pass.
    And I will keep you company
    Through those days so long and black.

    Sorry, I did it again. (*sigh* every time) My mind's just weird that way.

    I know that it hurts right now, but you will survive it. You're much stronger than you give yourself credit for. Notice that i didn't say you would get over it. You never will. Things like this stay with you your whole life. But you will survive it. It will be hard at first, but it -ever so gradually- gets easier. And the easier it gets, the more you will realize, you are not alone. Never were. Never will be.

    Never Forget

    With Love,
    Phillip
    | Posted on 2012-05-19 00:00:00 | by Swimming Bird | [ Reply to This ]
      Nose kiss is real.
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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