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    dots Submission Name: Praise Be to Goddots
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    Author: dancer-of-words
    ASL Info:    21/trans/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 167/158/74
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       I wrote this hymn after learning that I had hyperthyroidism.


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    dotsPraise Be to Goddots
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    Though trapped inside this body of death
    sorrowful, sore afflicted
    whose mouth called curses on my Lord
    whose hands cruel blows inflicted

    Praise be the Lord, who rescues me
    and ransoms for my soul
    let troubles come, and grief increase
    the Lord has made me whole.

    All weary trials I count as gain
    all loss and dire need
    for I am given Jesus Christ
    and so am rich indeed.

    Praise be to God who gives me peace
    Praise be to Him who lives.
    Praise be to Him who takes away.
    Praise be to Him who gives.




    Submitted on 2012-05-17 19:20:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful Poem!

    | Posted on 2012-10-08 00:00:00 | by jjd | [ Reply to This ]
      Being a Catholic, this was beautiful to read. Yes, Jesus Christ is always there for us no matter what we go through. Sometimes, we may feel so down that we tend to lose faith in Him but we should never forget that He is there silently cheering for us in ways we cannot understand.
    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice indeed.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-05-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      What a beautiful piece! He uses trials in our life, to build our faith even stronger. Some of the most wonderful moments, I have experienced with God have been when I was going through something difficult.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2012-05-17 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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