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    dots Submission Name: Aversiondots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Hope
    Hope is a peculiar angel
    She is the antipathy of faith
    And the promise of dreams
    The pessimist sardonic waiting in the wings
    To give you hope

    Bright the hours must be
    In the arms of hope
    To clinch upon the clouds penumbra
    When darkest drear runs petulant through veins
    So comes the clarion of hope

    A vague skeleton in her robes
    With her feathered wing-ed tears
    For courageous she comes
    But hammers theism upon the cold gold plate
    To make intuition beg forgiveness

    Too prideful to admit deceit, is hope
    Too formulated to walk with instinct
    Too lost in desperate wishings to bare fruit
    And grant epiphany in the eyes of trust
    Too many lies in the hope of truth

    A peculiar angel is always hope
    She is the antipathy of faith
    And the promise of dreams
    The persistent pessimist waiting sardonic
    In the wings of impossible hope





    Submitted on 2012-05-19 07:42:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is complicated, almost hopeless! A stampede of emotions, all in the grip of paralysis! is this what you're saying hope is? could be? a good read non the less.. almost euphoric, my type of read....kudos! vlad09
    | Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]


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