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    dots Submission Name: Windots

    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 60/63/33
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Battles of the heart & mind,
    can leave you tiresome.
    Fighting in endless time,
    the feat? Love.
    This war need be undone,
    unity is key.
    For there is nothing to be won,
    no way for either to succeed..
    If they dont agree.

    Submitted on 2012-05-19 18:09:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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