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    dots Submission Name: Lunar Madness! a REPOST..dots
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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsLunar Madness! a REPOST..dots
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    Lunar Madness
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    Was the summer of the bloody moon
    only witness to my killing
    unreachable, and so I worry
    the beam reflects from eyes of me
    and then you'll see what I have seen
    the murder scene of the obscene
    As I would be that morbid beast.

    My sight at night denies to glare a glaze of dreaded spears,
    to stare at me would spark the mark, as tragedy appears
    the blue declares a lunar freeze of lucid fear
    the fear this man would wear
    would smear his face with blood but not a single tear
    A diabolical despair will disappear
    as all my cares have shown why I'm demented,
    I'm drenching blood, for such a million dollar death sentence.







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