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Following Me


Author: eggshells
ASL Info:    23/M/WA
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Words: 124
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Following Me



Monday night,
My baby left me.
Tuesday night,
Sent me her key.

I suppose I'll never know
Just what demon is
Following me.

Wednesday night,
Found I had not one kid,
But three.
Thursday night,
Signed her off away from me.

I suppose I'll never know
Just what demon is
Following me.

Friday night,
My work asked me to leave.
Saturday night,
No money for rent,
Cause I'm not working.

I suppose I'll never know
Just what demon is
Following me.

Sunday night,
I left that place,
Traveled into the black

Left that demon in the dust,
Cleared my mind of rust,
And I ain't ever lookin' back.

fin fin fin
Eggshells




Submitted on 2012-05-20 20:51:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sometimes we just get a streak of bad...and it just keeps following us around...won't let go.

but i like that the speaker shrugs it off and says..."i'll never look back"---

probably best that way...looking forward is the way to go.

i liked the personification of "work" in that line..."work asked me to leave"

nice phrasing there.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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