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Submission Name: Dark Moon dots

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Author:	Wonderwords
Elite Ratio:	2.13 - 15/24/25
Words:	102

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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My daughter was in a lot of emotional pain last night.

Dark Moon dots

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Dark Moon

I had the swords in my back
Last night
I was well and truly defeated
I lay down and waves of
Despair washed over me

I want to cut out my heart
I am in so much pain
You said

You felt your pain
I felt my defeat

Today is a new day
And we will talk about
Deep matters
And shampoo,
Mundane things,
To mix with the blues,
Sorrows changing
Colours, hues

Tears, palour
Recuperation
Letting go
Music playing
Today is another day
Dark moon
Banished
Gone away

Submitted on 2012-05-21 07:50:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Thanks Damien, I was really worried about my daughter, but we are picking up the pieces. She is feeling broken hearted because of a boy. Just for a few hours I felt very defeated.
| Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by Wonderwords | [ Reply to This ]
sounds like you were broken hearted for a short minute, found someone else or reconciliated and things are groovy again,...cheers!!
| Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]

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