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    dots Submission Name: the book ive starteddots

    Author: violingurl1
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 577
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i started writing this a month ago i plan to have it done by a little after my 14th birthday

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    dotsthe book ive starteddots

    First Night With You
    By: Emily Weverstad
    The night sky is a sea of black velvet with small twinkling diamonds, as bright as day, as beautiful as you, sitting with you as the moonlight pools over your beautiful face making you shine like a jewel, your beauty magnified, you look into my eyes my heartís up in my throat, you give me a look that shows nothing but love, my heart is beating, I donít know whatís happening, I can only say, nothing. Iím sure you can hear my heart hammering, you tell me Iím beautiful, staring at the stars I smile at the world, I turn to you and say I love you, you turn to me and say I love you too.

    Without You
    By: Emily Weverstad
    The thunder is as loud as a bomb shot but I donít hear it.
    The lightning is as bright as the sun but I donít see it.
    The wind is as cool as the sea but I donít feel it.
    The water is as refreshing as the earth but I donít taste it.
    The air is as fresh as flowers but I donít smell it.
    The world is so perfect but I donít want it because what is a perfect world without you in it.

    Broken Hearted
    By: Emily Weverstad
    My tears fall, I cry your name over and over again, ďI love youĒ I say it again hoping that you will hear me, ďI love you, I love you, I love youĒ, but you never hear me, I cry again and I sit there, crying, broken hearted, wondering if love is even possible if you arenít the one who loves me.

    Loving You
    By: Emily Weverstad
    There is danger in love and love in danger, thereís a key to my heart and a person meant to find that key to free my heart from its stone walls, There is fire in love and love in fire, you find me, you are perfect, every caution slips away, you bring down my walls yet I feel safe, like nothing can hurt me while Iím here, in your arms, There is safety in love and love in safety, forevermore, with you.

    Abandoned Souls
    An abandoned soul, the only emotion left is pain, I wander the streets, I canít remember what love or happiness feels like, I cry, what do I do, you arenít here to dry my tears, like everyone else in my life you left me to suffer in pain.

    The Beauty and pain of love, enticing yet dangerous, beautiful yet horrid, a power to compelling to fight, a wonderful feeling thatís what loveís about.

    Watching You Leave
    Emily Weverstad
    My vision blurs, my cheeks are hot and soaked, as I watch you leave, I cry, did you ever love me, did you ever care, I cry as I watch you leave me here still clinging to my love for you forevermore

    Emo Hearts
    Emo hearts with fishnet wings bleed black blood when their soul sings. Cut apart, stiches back up, black from pain, and loss of love. Crying red tears, winged heart no longer flies, the black blood runsÖ..when the emo soul dies

    Love is letting go of our greatest obstacle, fear
    -Emily Weverstad

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