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    dots Submission Name: My Sweet Releasedots

    Author: YukiKnight360
    ASL Info:    21/Female/North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsMy Sweet Releasedots

    I take it out
    the blade is sharp
    I put it down
    onto the skin

    Pressing down
    my pain
    is now my relief

    As I watch
    the blood flows south
    dripping to the floor
    staining it red

    I dont cry
    i dont move
    the pain is good
    for now its my sweet release

    Submitted on 2012-05-22 18:12:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a great write!
    | Posted on 2012-05-23 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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