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    dots Submission Name: Lottiedots
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    Author: YukiKnight360
    ASL Info:    21/Female/North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 455
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    Description:
       I wrote this poem for a last minute school assignment and I did really well on it. When i was younger my mother and I didnt have a good relationship because she was married to a dick that all he did was argue and yell at anyone and anything. Some of the lines in this poem are references to parts of my life. Hard as it is at times i still made it through. I struggle day to day because of the things that dick had said to me. and im scared shitless to get out of my comfort zone so typing this up and posting it is way out of my comfort zone but i hope in doing this i will gain some confidence and self esteem


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    dotsLottiedots
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    Stand clear and don't fear
    He is hear and he tears
    your soul from your body
    it is quick and fast, Lottie!

    No blood and pain
    but still you feign
    I see it all
    with my cold dead soul, Lottie!

    Hold close and let go
    surely it will snow
    but you must know
    I will leave happy,Lottie!

    You stand here
    my eyes close
    my soul takes
    and i see snowflakes

    You were never there, Lottie!
    You never saw, Lottie!
    You never cared, Lottie!
    You let him take my dreams, Lottie!

    Now I am dead, Lottie!
    yet you still don't care, Lottie!
    You watched him kill me, Lottie!
    My mother you have never been, Lottie!







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