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    dots Submission Name: Changedots
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    Author: madsmurph99
    ASL Info:    13/female/Parma,OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 17/9/17
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 282
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 546



    Description:
       Alot of changes have been going on in my life and its hard to deal with.....


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    Change
    Change is alot of things...
    Its different
    Its scary
    And it takes alot to make a change
    Change can be difficult or upsetting
    It can be heart breaking
    Sometimes change means....
    losing a loved one
    moving
    new job
    new house
    new kid
    Sometimes change can even be good.....
    Like when you get a new friend or.....
    You get into a new relationship....
    But good or bad change is a scary thing......




    Submitted on 2012-05-23 11:52:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Felt this way before..very good!
    | Posted on 2012-05-23 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


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