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    dots Submission Name: HORRAY for HOLLYSHITdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 247
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHORRAY for HOLLYSHITdots

    Will you be forever enamoured by the glitz
    Forever drawn to the façade
    The makeup and the stage props
    Will life always be drained from a tin can
    With it’s easy ring pull of success

    Will you always be dazzled by the lights
    The catwalk powder lines of ecstasies
    And fame upon the dream of a label
    Forever remembered on flickering screens
    And feed the whims of limousines

    Will you always be so enthralled
    So rapturous in designer cloth
    To be so reduced in famous faces
    The iconic impeachment
    Of carbon copies

    So purchased by covertness envy
    In a daze of swimming pool sauna’s
    And X rated empathies
    Of glamorous mannequins
    Who for all the worth, achieve nothing

    Will you always be dangled on the noose
    Constrained to wish and never have
    Will the grit and grind of daily sweat
    Seem somehow paltry
    In the red carpet chiffon of paparazzi

    Buy and bury the artist
    No more the queue-card
    Or the teleprompt of clueless verbiage
    Swim in the luxuries of entertainment
    And wish

    Will you always by lead by the nose
    Lead into cardboard romance
    To dissatisfaction and daily boredom
    Will you always be slaves to the make believe
    The plaster-of-paris and fake jewellery
    To alleviate the pain of your poverty

    At first you think you are insane
    Until the illusion steals your sanity

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