Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Made of Earthdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 444
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1210



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMade of Earthdots
    -------------------------------------------




    Should I be alone in this world
    One that I cannot touch
    Or
    Choose to be alone in another world
    The only one I see
    To want less
    Not more
    Of all the useless complexities

    What difference would it make
    Accept in tactile qualities
    That one would perhaps be so empty
    And the other still as lonely

    Somewhere on the haunts of solitude
    The tendencies of thought may spring anew
    Become less ephemeral
    But made of Earth in footprints of their horizons

    What rock or pebble or even cloud
    To keep me company
    If different eyes can find fresh words
    And other ways to spell them
    Where on my tongue their antipathy
    Is lost
    Breathed silently into unknown skies

    If such an endeavour could but once
    Rest itself of trouble
    And lay upon my heart
    One single glance
    One gestalt
    One aching significance
    And from the penumbra of fretful ties
    Into light
    Nor to feel so vacantly exhausted
    And never return to darkling pith
    And never remember loneliness




    Submitted on 2012-05-23 12:50:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      This one moved me so...as to ponder the point of having relationships at all. and yes, the answer is .,..NO!
    | Posted on 2012-05-25 00:00:00 | by delusional | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    195204

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    The World written by jjd
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry