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    dots Submission Name: Made of Earthdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Should I be alone in this world
    One that I cannot touch
    Or
    Choose to be alone in another world
    The only one I see
    To want less
    Not more
    Of all the useless complexities

    What difference would it make
    Accept in tactile qualities
    That one would perhaps be so empty
    And the other still as lonely

    Somewhere on the haunts of solitude
    The tendencies of thought may spring anew
    Become less ephemeral
    But made of Earth in footprints of their horizons

    What rock or pebble or even cloud
    To keep me company
    If different eyes can find fresh words
    And other ways to spell them
    Where on my tongue their antipathy
    Is lost
    Breathed silently into unknown skies

    If such an endeavour could but once
    Rest itself of trouble
    And lay upon my heart
    One single glance
    One gestalt
    One aching significance
    And from the penumbra of fretful ties
    Into light
    Nor to feel so vacantly exhausted
    And never return to darkling pith
    And never remember loneliness




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      This one moved me so...as to ponder the point of having relationships at all. and yes, the answer is .,..NO!
    | Posted on 2012-05-25 00:00:00 | by delusional | [ Reply to This ]


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