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    dots Submission Name: Divide by Zerodots
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    Author: Esophagus1
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    dotsDivide by Zerodots
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    Zero, a number to divide by.
    To put something nowhere
    when it belongs to the sky.

    To annihilate the hope
    of life as it chokes and dies
    hung from the rope
    of none.

    Zero is the true one.
    Eating itself back to life it dies.
    Creation and destruction
    perfectly harmonized
    in life.

    Simplicity to complexity gives rise
    bleeding out into the skies.
    Blood of existence is none.
    Dividing zero into one
    reality is shunned
    to become the son.




    Submitted on 2012-05-23 14:36:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice!! Well written and a great message.. The title caught my eye and seeing the topic you placed this post at had me wondering how "zero" could relate to "longing" but I get it and this was GREAT!!! thanks for sharing

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2012-06-18 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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