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    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    The music that remains in its circle
    Penetrates through the nerves of this world
    Like the silence laying within me, breathes..

    Like the noise in my decorative dreams, plays
    Whisper of my awoken eyes, dreams
    And the moan in my dying screams, lives..

    Some steps are never declared, but waded
    Your loving eyes, turn more of the sky
    Some encounters that you leave unattended
    Stay inside my dreams and mornings
    Loving me.




    Submitted on 2012-05-26 05:06:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i can feel a sense of longing here..longing to be part of something and to receive love..I'm not sure but these are just my thoughts about it..this is nice by the way:)
    | Posted on 2012-09-23 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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