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    dots Submission Name: You and Medots

    Author: darkwhtangel
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 12/10/2
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       A new awakening, of my sleeping passion.

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    dotsYou and Medots

    You and Me

    You came in
    Came in so unexpected
    You looking at me and
    Me stealing peeks at you

    I can't help myself
    I feel my whole body flush
    I have to smile

    Your close in my dreams and
    Always in my thoughts.
    They set me on fire.

    My heart beats
    So fast
    Can you hear it?

    Submitted on 2012-05-27 07:10:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the simplicity in this. The last lines inspired me to write a haiku. Here it is:

    My heart beats faster
    and faster, faster, faster
    Can you hear it love?
    | Posted on 2012-11-29 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

    simple but so smooth with the wording and flow of feeling...i really like this.

    i think you meant "you're close in my dreams"

    i really like the idea of "hearing the speed of heart"

    rather than feeling it...that is cool.

    | Posted on 2012-11-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this so much. It is like love acted out on paper. I miss feeling excited over someone. This reminds me how much I miss it.
    | Posted on 2012-11-20 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, sweet and to the point. I like it.
    | Posted on 2012-06-08 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2012-06-07 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]

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