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    dots Submission Name: Stream in Lonely Wooddots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    32/m/Ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 49/54/28
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Haiku/Romance
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    dotsStream in Lonely Wooddots
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    Stream in lonely wood.
    Here could bridge two paths if would;
    where this dead tree stood.




    Submitted on 2012-05-27 07:44:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      haiku that expresses much to me...the idea of giving up a life to bring others together...the question arises...will we take advantage of it?
    | Posted on 2012-05-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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