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    dots Submission Name: From the Depthsdots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 725
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1243



    Description:
       About the pain my exhusband put me through and how someone was able to give me the strength to leave him and move on.


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    dotsFrom the Depthsdots
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    I was bound and confined
    against my freewill.
    Abused and subdued,
    held captive until

    relieved from my hell,
    released from my prison,
    rescued from torment,
    with your help I have risen.

    I'm no longer cornered
    cowering in fear.
    Saved from agony,
    never again will I hear

    that I'm second best,
    that I'll never be enough.
    'Cause now I stand up,
    know when to call his bluff.

    Now I have choices,
    I can speak my thoughts.
    I'm no longer afraid;
    from the depths you've brought

    this girl from torture,
    her mind from depression.
    I've come to realize
    what I used to question.

    God didn't punish me
    for something I'd done;
    He held my hand through the pain,
    'cause in the long run

    He lined things up perfect,
    gave life to my dreams,
    so you and I could meet,
    so you could redeem

    this frail heart from anguish
    and fill it back to the top
    with confidence and trust,
    with a love that won't stop.




    Submitted on 2012-05-29 10:18:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, a great write about the transformation in life caused by an angelic person. Everything is destined and everything happens for some purpose.One needs to have a firm conviction in this notion.God presides in his creation and he comes to our help through his creatures.
    | Posted on 2012-06-03 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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