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    dots Submission Name: I Admit Itdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/452
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI Admit Itdots
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    I'm ill,
    I need help.

    I'm hurt,
    I need healing.

    I'm broken,
    I need repair.

    I'm bleeding,
    I need a tourniquet.

    I'm destroyed,
    I need new life.

    I'm hurt...

    I need support




    Submitted on 2012-05-31 01:08:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Clear vision is sometimes the hardest to see. It doesn't help to hear, "but you are so bright, so smart" like that means someone needs nothing they cannot provide themselves, work it out. Perceptions lie even in the best of conditions, and the brain makes as much of it as it is capable. Can we be jealous of the simple love such as one gets from a pet dog? Unconditional love, simple and easy to return. There's a lot of power in such as that.
    | Posted on 2012-06-01 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I seem to need
    as often as I want

    is there a difference?
    they're both my favorite haunts

    both suck me dry
    until my marrow shifts like dust

    and still I linger
    sustained on crumbs of trust
    | Posted on 2012-05-31 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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