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    dots Submission Name: Disaster.. dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 136
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    dotsDisaster.. dots
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    I am a complete and total disaster ...
    It was bound to happen at some point
    However recent events have sparked several emotions
    From complete euphoria ...
    Flying high in sky... with our arrow-dynamic mammals
    No drugs... No assistance is needed for this type of happiness

    Yet...
    I soon find myself on a crash and burn course
    The smoke and flames are only a glimpse of the true devastation that has just occurred.
    Now at rock bottom
    I await..
    In the darkness..

    As if I am in the midsts of a hurricane
    These emotions equivalent to that of tides
    Thrashing .. yet caressing.. Beating.. yet cradling
    Its home..
    The Shore...
    Too many high points to count,
    Too many low points to spot,

    For I am a Complete and Total Disaster...




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      If I might borrow a thought from my martial arts repertoire, carrousel ceaselessly ceremony chaos character charisma. For as you see I'm a complete and total disaster myself. I like to think I could rise above it but I'm afraid it's eminently exigent on the enigma entity. Why I could become genocidally xenophobic on the guidon guile, terminus thrall and all, positive states of amalgamated anathema android. I know, I know, sheer decadent arrogance, but consider spontaneous synchronous. Oh I don't know, just trying to tickle your fancy, sort of throw a little bit of humor on your self deprecating divulgence. Seriously you should treat yourself better.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-06-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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