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    dots Submission Name: It Gets Betterdots

    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       Bullying in any form is not OK! People everywhere are taking their lives because of hateful words and prejudice. Don't bring any more negativity into the world, just up build and be accepting.
    "It doesn't matter if you love him, or capital H-i-m. Just put your paws up, cause you were born this way!" - Lady Gaga

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    dotsIt Gets Betterdots

    Who are you to topple down
    The life I'm building, the love I've found
    To criticize and judge my life
    And instill such terrorizing strife

    You think your words pierce through my skin
    But in reality I am wearing thin
    From bitter blows that have me scraped to the bone
    These scars are proof of the hate I'm shown

    The bile you spray is nothing new to my ears
    You seek a reaction, but I won't shed a tear
    I'm all cried out from a lifetime of pain
    My tear ducts have gone dry and not a drop remains

    The abuse I've endured has left me battered and bruised
    The welts still fresh from the resent that you spew
    But I lick my wounds and push my self forward
    Not letting you win, not being a coward

    For those in the past that you chose to berate
    May you feel their anguish, as I felt your hate
    Let it tear your mind knowing you were wrong
    And as you lay there broken, you've only made me strong.

    Submitted on 2012-06-01 10:50:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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