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Fabric version 2


Author: Mithrandir
ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452 /681 /113
Words: 109
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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this is the final version.


Fabric version 2



You left a hole
In the fabric of my life

Just below the heart
Your claws caught hold

Now my hands tremble
As I try to write this patch

To keep everything
From unraveling

Did I trust too soon?
Did I do something wrong?

I just dont know

So here I sit
Trying to weave

A new pattern

something to endure
The test of time

You left a hole
In the fabric of my life

Just below the heart
Your claws caught hold

Now my hands are trembling

Pray ill never be
So naive again




Submitted on 2012-06-02 13:38:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "write this patch"
man, i like that line bunches...

this concept works well...very nice metaphor for heartbreak...and the empty space we are left with afterward.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-06-02 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  Naivety can be a good thing showing that we are still unharmed enough to be believing people will be good. I know it might seem counter intuitive, considering, but I feel it's a good thing to be able to give. I hope that lacuna in your life heals still leaving you with a modicum of your innocence intact.

Bruce
| Posted on 2012-06-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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