Fabric version 2

Author: Mithrandir ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y. Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452 /681 /113 Words: 109

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Fabric version 2

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You left a hole In the fabric of my life Just below the heart Your claws caught hold Now my hands tremble As I try to write this patch To keep everything From unraveling Did I trust too soon? Did I do something wrong? I just dont know So here I sit Trying to weave A new pattern something to endure The test of time You left a hole In the fabric of my life Just below the heart Your claws caught hold Now my hands are trembling Pray ill never be So naive again

Submitted on 2012-06-02 13:38:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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"write this patch" man, i like that line bunches... this concept works well...very nice metaphor for heartbreak...and the empty space we are left with afterward. jacob

| Posted on 2012-06-02 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

Naivety can be a good thing showing that we are still unharmed enough to be believing people will be good. I know it might seem counter intuitive, considering, but I feel it's a good thing to be able to give. I hope that lacuna in your life heals still leaving you with a modicum of your innocence intact. Bruce

| Posted on 2012-06-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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