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    dots Submission Name: Cruel Intentdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCruel Intentdots
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    Only the reign of cruelty
    The mask of happy intention spits
    Contented smiles of idiot deception
    The twisted dagger regurgitated

    We cannot live

    Whose choice is this
    To hold by semblance of the truth
    The truth whose tongue is couched in a lie
    We cannot live
    And by paltry fashion
    And blind acceptance
    So we squander all of life

    This last resort of habitual damnation
    Spouted for a grip on the future
    We walk the same path
    Endlessly

    Generation after generation
    Follow in the obedience
    Of threat and torture
    That violent institution
    Of humanities continued governance

    We cannot live
    Save to feed the unremitting wealth
    As parasites hang in the gnawing of our souls
    We build our lives
    To the prosperity of their perpetual
    Propaganda

    Habitual by cruel intention

    These lives subservient
    These facades of love
    These easy excuses for contentment
    Are the cinema stools
    And television screens
    Of lives predetermined
    By slavery

    You cannot live

    As you swim through the technical contraption
    As denial festers dark
    And the price of your comfort
    Is the small change of starving children

    When every tactile illusion
    Savagely built to define your world
    Is counted in the cost of suffering
    Of someone else

    Only the reign of cruelty
    The mask of happy intention spits
    Contented smiles of idiot deception
    The twisted dagger regurgitated

    We cannot live





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