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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Now im stuck in this life livn styls idk but sumhow alng da way its lyk ryt now im fukn grown n thr aint shyt i can do but liv da way i do cuz its da only lyf i knw any othr ive no clu so now wat am i to do wil sum1 sho me sum direction tel me whr wer goin cuz as far as i knw dis whol tym we bin gesn n thn u hav da fukn nerv to ask me da fukn question whr did all dis com frm cuz i dnt evn knw my name let alon sum moral bhind ur shity game who r u to question n who am i to blam id rathr neithr of us has to wlk away n pain or cary all da sham id realy rathr answr all ur questions rathr plain i ges dats how it goes when ur grwn without a hom i gues dat goes to show mayb wer all jus as alon




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