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    dots Submission Name: GOOD MORNING FRIENDdots
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    Author: janekostman09
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    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
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    dotsGOOD MORNING FRIENDdots
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    Good morning friend how have you been isnít it wonderful talking again yes I know we just spoke yesterday. But if you only knew how much I think of you each and every day, you would see me on my knees asking God to please keep you safe.
    I am so glad youíre in my life dear friend. I have needed someone for so long that I canít remember the last time I felt I belonged and its sure been a while since someoneís made me smile and feel loved. If it wasnít for you I would have probably already given up.
    Yes dear friend I know I can lean on you when Iím not so strong and I know you will be there to help me Carrie on. Latter I will be expecting a call so I can hear.
    Good night dear friend Good night today hasnít been so bad with you by my side. I know things make me a little down sometimes, but life would be so harder if I didnít have a dear friend like you to talk to and share my strife.
    And every day I look forward to saying Good morning dear friend how have you been? Oh isnít it wonderful, wonderful, and talking again.
    Isnít it wonderful- oh dear friend




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      I don't know what I would do without my friends. Great job on this, it made me remember all the friends I ever had.
    | Posted on 2015-04-26 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]


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