Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: GOOD MORNING FRIENDdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
    Total Views: 448
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1129



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsGOOD MORNING FRIENDdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Good morning friend how have you been isnít it wonderful talking again yes I know we just spoke yesterday. But if you only knew how much I think of you each and every day, you would see me on my knees asking God to please keep you safe.
    I am so glad youíre in my life dear friend. I have needed someone for so long that I canít remember the last time I felt I belonged and its sure been a while since someoneís made me smile and feel loved. If it wasnít for you I would have probably already given up.
    Yes dear friend I know I can lean on you when Iím not so strong and I know you will be there to help me Carrie on. Latter I will be expecting a call so I can hear.
    Good night dear friend Good night today hasnít been so bad with you by my side. I know things make me a little down sometimes, but life would be so harder if I didnít have a dear friend like you to talk to and share my strife.
    And every day I look forward to saying Good morning dear friend how have you been? Oh isnít it wonderful, wonderful, and talking again.
    Isnít it wonderful- oh dear friend




    Submitted on 2012-06-04 11:52:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I don't know what I would do without my friends. Great job on this, it made me remember all the friends I ever had.
    | Posted on 2015-04-26 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    195289

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    untitled written by Outlaw
    The World written by jjd
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry