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    dots Submission Name: Future Uncertain ? ¿dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsFuture Uncertain ? ¿dots
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    The future is unwritten
    So you would do your best to pray for hope
    The future is so uncertain
    As you dangle on life’s unsteady rope

    And so

    Will it be the preponderance
    To accept the stricture
    The indoctrination of all your answers
    To the future

    Stereotyped and moulded
    Into the collected feculence
    Of a billion likewise repeat performance
    In the pathological psychosis of generations

    Enslaved
    By easy answers

    The future is unwritten
    So they tell you
    And every flourishing ambition of the children
    Is exactly the same as their parents

    Appease the agony of your soul
    With entertainment
    Dig deep the gratifying
    So the unrelenting despondency can seem more distant

    But you know
    The future is already written

    It will prove itself by its perpetuated sameness
    In trades days
    And bought off conscience
    So you would do your best to pray for hope

    Sleep well while you lay in the trap
    And pointless purpose
    In continued enslavement
    To
    Somebody else’s
    Wealth







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