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    dots Submission Name: Vengeancedots
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    Author: TheInvisible
    ASL Info:    22/f/The Valley of Doom
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 51/55/37
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 448
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    dotsVengeancedots
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    Goodbye, Love,
    you darling, fickle thing.
    Goodbye, sweet Cruelty,
    we've been friends for far too long.
    Hello, Rage,
    I need your aid this night.
    My apologies, Sorrow,
    but I ask that you feed your brother.
    Mercy, beloved Mercy,
    go now, I cannot bring you with us.
    For soon we will greet Vengeance,
    cold and bitter to it's ends.




    Submitted on 2012-06-08 03:12:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great job with the transition and all of the relativity. High marks across he board
    | Posted on 2012-06-17 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]
      kinda sad but I like how the flow to this poem was unique thank you for sharing
    | Posted on 2012-06-13 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


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