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Author: col13x
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Words: 187
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Something that tastes of chocolate
But like potato chips has that satisfying crunch
Needs to be a chewable
Filled with nutzzz
With coconut and tomato
A hint of Basil and Oregano
Then cheese

Yes cheeezzzye cheese

While honey floats on a cracker tease
With pickle
The flavour flood of sudden seafood
Which reminds you of chicken
Beef and mustard sandwich
On a cucumber slice

With strawberryzzz
Yes and vol-au-vent rattlesnake mushroom pastries
A Sinsemilla munchie binge
The one packet fills all

A Sunday roast parsnip
Of an English breakfast
And buttered garlic with escargot
In a little flak jacketzzz of culinary explosions
An’ taste bud demolitions

Bake bean and banana tuna salads
Apricot waffle and frogs legs soufflé
All smoked in a pheasant
In one pop open packet of crunchable delight
With ice cream
And pistachio hundreds and thousands chipzzz
Whiff of mint in a fresh fish market
Fifteen year old single malt whisky
Partially laced and alcoholic
And sends you on a psilocybin trip


Submitted on 2012-06-08 17:23:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I get the feeling you are hungry. o_o
Also, this is really cool. Not sure what you're up to with the zzz's, but at least you were consistent with them, so they sort of flowed through.

...are you stoned? xP
| Posted on 2012-06-08 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]

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