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    dots Submission Name: Heaven on Earthdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHeaven on Earthdots
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    It could be compared to heaven,
    If there is such a majestic place. The
    Beauty captivates me, compels me
    To put pen to paper, to capture a
    Glorious photograph with starch and ink.
    The creaky boat glides gracefully
    Through the smooth, luxurious waters
    As the sunlight dances off the tiny
    Currents we've made with our oars.
    They glitter in the golden rays that
    Proceeded to light up the vibrant
    Cyan skies, so clear and wide.
    I felt as if I can finally stretch my
    Stressed arms and not hit a ceiling.
    It was so refreshingly open. The light
    Summer breeze was like a sparkly blue
    Steam I breathed in. It loosened my tense
    Muscles and cleared my racing mind. We passed
    By gorgeous pink lilies peeking out from
    The glassy surface, smiling up with love
    At the brilliant sun.
    He plucked one out of the water and
    Handed it to me. Its petals were
    Like satin between my fingers. Its
    Comforting aroma wrapped its arms around us.
    He pulled me down gently to the floor of the
    Boat as we laid side by side,
    Watching the sky transform from cyan
    To flamboyant pinks and mellow orange hues.
    Soon the shiny stars emerged from their
    Daily slumber and dotted the deep purple
    And navy cover. Distant crickets chirped as
    The nightlife of the stream began to stir.
    He kissed me on the cheek and got up,
    Starting to row us back home. I, however,
    continued laying there, thinking that if
    There really was a heaven, it would be
    Just like this.




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